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Friday, March 26, 2021

Change as class presedent.

 Hi guys! This one of my latest pieces of writing, This one is about what I would change about the school or add to the school if I were class Precedent,well,you can't really call me class Precedent, i'm changing the whole shcool!haha, Here's my work!

3 comments:

  1. Nitya i really love your story, I like how you put so much effort into this masterpiece! It truely is an amazing story but I think there are some mistakes and also i think this would be an amazing high school and ya because theres a canteen and all of that! but ya have an amazing day and i luv you bestie!!! :3

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  2. That's cool but you should read your story twice.Cause there are some mistakes.Thanks
    Sneha

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  3. Hi Nitya, it's great to see that you are voicing your opinions. It shows that you are constantly reflecting about our school environment and thinking of new ways to improve it. I think having student-led clubs is a great idea because they have so much knowledge to offer. The student council is also great because it gives them the power to make bigger decisions. Some spelling reminders - cafeteria, finish, president.

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