Hello Everyone! Sorry I haven't posted in a while, I've been kinda busy... he he....
Anyway,I've made a made up creature called the strawberry fox, this took be about 1-2 days to finish. I hope you like it! We were learning to make paragraphs that flow btw UwU OwO
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My nonsense creature.
By Nitya.
Purpose:To inform
Audience:Mrs. Kwok
R.T:Use punctuation
The strawberry fox only comes out at night,it lurks around strawberry bushes,it examines it’s next meal,and then in an blink of an eye,it eats it and scurry off!It is also a master of camouflage,some say it’s better than the chameleon!Some even say it can turn invisible,but the truth is that ,it has very small molecules on it’s fur,very similar to a chameleon,but it can change whenever it want to.It gets it’s red pigment from it’s favourite food, strawberries.These foxes have evolved to have green on the tip of it’s tail because back then,they used to mistake strawberry foxes for the original northern american red fox,and most hunters like red foxes,so they accidentally killed the strawberry fox,this is also a reason why they are so endangered.Luckily, strawberry fox orphanages are opening all around the world! By Nitya.
Kia Ora Nitya, I am so amazed by your creativity! Not only have you provided detailed descriptions of the Strawberry Fox's appearance, you've also explained how it changes colour and why they are endangered. This background information adds interest and believability to your report. Just a little grammar reminder, remember to use capitals letters for proper nouns - Northern American. The second last sentence can also be split into two sentences instead one long one. Other than that, fantastic writing!
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