READING I can see that you are starting to collect evidence from the texts which is a good start. Lets have a think about question 1a: See the last sentence in paragraph 3 (slide 8). For some skateboarders, they use their tricks to express how they feel. Why might the Olympics affect this? For question 2a, well done for recognizing that Mr Pardo thinks that E-sports is similar to the Olympics because players need quick reflexes. Another reason can be found in this quote "Video games are very likely to become a spectator sport". How does this quote support E-sports being in the Olympics?
MATHS You've shown a good understanding of your multiplication and division basic facts on slides 22-25. Great job on slide 27-30 as well.
WRITING I like the new characters you have created, very kawaii! Amazing job on the poem, not only did you use precise verbs - pound, detonate, sneak, abide. You've also used alliteration and simile. I had goosebumps just thinking about the tarantula and I really got the sense of how the creeper is waiting to attack any moment!
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READING
ReplyDeleteI can see that you are starting to collect evidence from the texts which is a good start. Lets have a think about question 1a: See the last sentence in paragraph 3 (slide 8). For some skateboarders, they use their tricks to express how they feel. Why might the Olympics affect this? For question 2a, well done for recognizing that Mr Pardo thinks that E-sports is similar to the Olympics because players need quick reflexes. Another reason can be found in this quote "Video games are very likely to become a spectator sport". How does this quote support E-sports being in the Olympics?
MATHS
You've shown a good understanding of your multiplication and division basic facts on slides 22-25. Great job on slide 27-30 as well.
WRITING
I like the new characters you have created, very kawaii! Amazing job on the poem, not only did you use precise verbs - pound, detonate, sneak, abide. You've also used alliteration and simile. I had goosebumps just thinking about the tarantula and I really got the sense of how the creeper is waiting to attack any moment!