SMOKING SHOULD BE ILLEGAL!!!!!
If We smoke it will damage our lungs.We should also stop cutting down trees.I want New Zealand to be an environment friendly country,if we cut down trees the same thing will happen,We won’t be able to breath because there is no oxygen and then we will all DIE!!!!
By Nitya
Hey Nitya,
ReplyDeleteI’m Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team, and I’m excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
It’s really cool to hear how passionate you are about this topic. I think it’s really important to be heard when there is something really important you think needs to change.
The points you make are very convincing, and you also tell us what you would like New Zealand to be like. The Bold font and exclamation points show the reader how much you care about the issue.
I’m looking forward to seeing more fantastic work from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel
Thanks Daniel!
DeleteHello, Nitya.
ReplyDeleteI'm Nicholas.
I disagree with your opinion because it's their decision if they want to smoke or not. In the Netherlands its legal, and I'm completely fine with that. It's not up to you to decide their fate. If they smoke I know it will damage their lungs but if its what they want to do, you can't change them. I kinda agree with your second argument. We kinda need to cut down trees for houses. Do you want people to live on the streets? But we do need oxygen. But theres lots more trees so, that kind of ruins your point. Overall, great work. Just add more information to make your point.
Nicholas :D
Thank you nic, for that very helpful comment..
Delete*She says through a fake smile....*